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April 10th, 2011, 12:28 am

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JoKeR, April 11th, 2011, 4:52 am     Reply


Well ...what to say...

First: you are good. Your characters seems plausible, your outlines are really nice but how do you use the perspective in each scenery is astonishing good.

Second: The use of colour is pleasant but not the colouring technique. those crayon lines distract very often and I got the feeling to be irritated ...sometimes it is very exhausting to read the comic because of the many lines caused by this crayon colour style.

If you change this somehow this comic will be more fun to read. Keep up the good work.

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roxietran, April 11th, 2011, 9:28 am     Reply

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This is actually one of Mayshing's older works using traditional mediums. If you see her newest pages for this comic on her site, she's been doing CG for a while now. Over the next volumes you can see the style change and evolve.

Ramonerdna, June 4th, 2011, 9:32 pm     Reply


i like how she makes it sound like she was being selfish by breathing

BaroqueMillipede, February 7th, 2015, 12:06 am     Reply


I like this coloring style! It's refreshing to see "traditional" coloring. Personally, I get tired of all the CG coloring out there in web comics; true, some of it is very nicely done, but it never looks "real" to me.

 

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