Hired as a nurse for a militant cyborg family who are super weapons, Angel finds herself caught in the family's power struggle. Angel must convince these reverse Pinocchios a normal life is good without getting killed.
First: you are good. Your characters seems plausible, your outlines are really nice but how do you use the perspective in each scenery is astonishing good.
Second: The use of colour is pleasant but not the colouring technique. those crayon lines distract very often and I got the feeling to be irritated ...sometimes it is very exhausting to read the comic because of the many lines caused by this crayon colour style.
If you change this somehow this comic will be more fun to read. Keep up the good work.
This is actually one of Mayshing's older works using traditional mediums. If you see her newest pages for this comic on her site, she's been doing CG for a while now. Over the next volumes you can see the style change and evolve.
I like this coloring style! It's refreshing to see "traditional" coloring. Personally, I get tired of all the CG coloring out there in web comics; true, some of it is very nicely done, but it never looks "real" to me.